Friday, March 27, 2009

laiya dawn
Ended up editing the first final draft of our report. OMG. It sucks. So bad. There were paragraphs, there were non-paragraphs, there were even non-sentences. And worse, wrong trends and analyses! Shit! At least for the first third. The rest, which is the part the prof would most likely read, is cleaner and is better written. Of course there is still that issue of overlapping topics among paragraphs. I think I can remove at least 5 pages from our report after editing.

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I still have plenty of Laiya pics and some more San Juan pics (that I haven't finished processing yet). After that will be tons of Japan pics. JAPAN BAYBEH!

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